Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by Flashlight237 » Mon Aug 10, 2020 2:59 pm

Robby wrote:
Mon Aug 10, 2020 2:52 pm
Pretty nice suggestions here! I'll have to refer back to here when it's time to add in the next boss and enemies and such! As for now, I've got a few other things to complete before hand.
Yeah, I'd like her to come AFTER Gator Rex. I'm still coming up with ideas for her story-wise. I even had a cutscene in mind with her saying one of the Thanos-famous lines: "Fine... I'll do it myself."

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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by Flashlight237 » Thu Aug 13, 2020 11:41 pm

I made some progress on Moonchyllus. I sketched her from the usual 3/4 front perspective one would expect to see in Eliatopia, along with various hand poses for when Moonchyllus moves her right arm for an attack. I also sent in the following message.:

"In the meantime, I recommend contacting this voice actress for Moonchyllus' voice: https://amandaparkervoices.com/

Voice acting is a pretty dang cheap form of artwork; her rates are 25 cents a word; $10 minimum. I already have some voice clips ready to go: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... tack_1.mp3
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... amaged.mp3

As for the other voice clips, when contacting the actress I've linked, give her the following info.

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Voice Reference: Dawn of Total Drama
Lines:

"Fine... I'll do it myself." (disgruntled; think Thanos from the MCU)
"What the heck is this? One of Xantis' pawns? Hmph, I'm sure my lovely creations will handle them nice and easy." (Normal, slightly disgruntled)
"Tell me, mortal, does this Xantis moron know who he's dealing with? I created all life on Eliatopia and even the planet itself; his defiance is a nuisance to me." (Normal for the first sentence; confrontational on the second sentence.)
"You dare defy Mother Earth? I'll show you just who you're messing with, and Xantis too shall know that nature doesn't mess around with those who commit affronts against the environment." (Angry)
"This is as far as you go, mortal..! As Mother Nature herself, I will make sure your death is both short and painful..! Feel the wrath of the planet you so seek to poison with your presence!" (Pissed Off)
"Take this!" (attacking)
"Feel the wrath of nature!" (another attacking sound)
-panting noises- (I mean duh!)
-Dragon Ball Z-ish power up yell- (Pretty much this nonsense: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wwb_l20_RqQ )
"Urgh!" -pant- -pant- "dang you..! Nngh..! H-huh..? Wait, you aren't associated with Xantis at all..? Huh... I guess I was mistaken... Needless to say, Xantis must fall if we want order restored to this world. The last thing we need is a lunatic going about tarnishing the planet I've given life to. Thank goodness I held back against you; otherwise, I wouldn't have snapped out of it... In any case, you should try and deal with Xantis' creations. I'll deal with Xantis myself in the meantime. Take care."

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You're free to add anything else you wish; as long as she's given a voice, Moonchyllus should make for a memorable boss.

As for the voice clips themselves, once you get them, you can either send them to me by email (drawingmarc@gmail.com) or on Discord (Flashlight237#5027) so I can add in the godly voice effect, or you can add the effect yourself. If you want to do it yourself, here's how to do it:

1. On Audacity, copy the voicelines and paste them in twice.
2. On the first copy, click "Effect," then go down to "Change Pitch." Turn the Pitch Down by 10%. After that, click "Effect," then go to "Echo." You want it to be set to a Delay Time of 0.2 seconds and a Decay Factor of 0.3.
3. On the second copy, apply a pitch change as well, but turn the pitch down to 25% instead of 10%. Apply the same echo you did before. Once that's done, go to "Effects," then "Reverb." Set the Reverb up like this: http://prntscr.com/tz98a7
4. Amplify the original track, NOT the copies, by five decibels.

Follow the instructions I've provided and you'll get a nice godlike effect.

As for other sound effects, well, here ya go: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... ffects.zip

She's coming along smoothly, I'll tell ya that."

The best way to handle build-up is with care.
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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by LayZBoi » Thu Aug 13, 2020 11:54 pm

Flashlight237 wrote:
Thu Aug 13, 2020 11:41 pm
I made some progress on Moonchyllus. I sketched her from the usual 3/4 front perspective one would expect to see in Eliatopia, along with various hand poses for when Moonchyllus moves her right arm for an attack. I also sent in the following message.:

"In the meantime, I recommend contacting this voice actress for Moonchyllus' voice: https://amandaparkervoices.com/

Voice acting is a pretty dang cheap form of artwork; her rates are 25 cents a word; $10 minimum. I already have some voice clips ready to go: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... tack_1.mp3
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... amaged.mp3

As for the other voice clips, when contacting the actress I've linked, give her the following info.

---

Voice Reference: Dawn of Total Drama
Lines:

"Fine... I'll do it myself." (disgruntled; think Thanos from the MCU)
"What the heck is this? One of Xantis' pawns? Hmph, I'm sure my lovely creations will handle them nice and easy." (Normal, slightly disgruntled)
"Tell me, mortal, does this Xantis moron know who he's dealing with? I created all life on Earth; his defiance is a nuisance to me." (Normal for the first sentence; confrontational on the second sentence.)
"You dare defy Mother Earth? I'll show you just who you're messing with, and Xantis too shall know that nature doesn't mess around with those who commit affronts against the environment." (Angry)
"This is as far as you go, mortal..! As Mother Nature herself, I will make sure your death is both short and painful..! Feel the wrath of the planet you so seek to poison with your presence!" (Pissed Off)
"Take this!" (attacking)
"Feel the wrath of nature!" (another attacking sound)
-panting noises- (I mean duh!)
-Dragon Ball Z-ish power up yell- (Pretty much this nonsense: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wwb_l20_RqQ )
"Urgh!" -pant- -pant- "dang you..! Nngh..! H-huh..? Wait, you aren't associated with Xantis at all..? Huh... I guess I was mistaken... Needless to say, Xantis must fall if we want order restored to this world. The last thing we need is a lunatic going about tarnishing the planet I've given life to. Thank goodness I held back against you; otherwise, I wouldn't have snapped out of it... In any case, you should try and deal with Xantis' creations. I'll deal with Xantis myself in the meantime. Take care."

---

You're free to add anything else you wish; as long as she's given a voice, Moonchyllus should make for a memorable boss.

As for the voice clips themselves, once you get them, you can either send them to me by email (drawingmarc@gmail.com) or on Discord (Flashlight237#5027) so I can add in the godly voice effect, or you can add the effect yourself. If you want to do it yourself, here's how to do it:

1. On Audacity, copy the voicelines and paste them in twice.
2. On the first copy, click "Effect," then go down to "Change Pitch." Turn the Pitch Down by 10%. After that, click "Effect," then go to "Echo." You want it to be set to a Delay Time of 0.2 seconds and a Decay Factor of 0.3.
3. On the second copy, apply a pitch change as well, but turn the pitch down to 25% instead of 10%. Apply the same echo you did before. Once that's done, go to "Effects," then "Reverb." Set the Reverb up like this: http://prntscr.com/tz98a7
4. Amplify the original track, NOT the copies, by five decibels.

Follow the instructions I've provided and you'll get a nice godlike effect.

As for other sound effects, well, here ya go: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... ffects.zip

She's coming along smoothly, I'll tell ya that."

The best way to handle build-up is with care.
now thats some epik stuff

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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by Savage0 » Fri Aug 14, 2020 12:04 am

I agree with her holding back (Its a god for ..... god's sake) Don't think the word "Earth" should be used ...... (Planet there on isn't Earth ..... don't remember 1st cutscene too much) And about Xantis .... Guess he's stronger than a god for whatever reason, unless he's like President Shinra in FF7 ..... big figure that gets killed off easily (Albeit by Sephiroth, played it like 5 years ago don't remember too well)
Any-whom, support 2X
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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by Flashlight237 » Fri Aug 14, 2020 7:02 am

Well, here's Moonchyllus:
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Her hands are a bit detailed, but you gotta make things detailed for the best animations.

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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by yasvsV » Fri Aug 14, 2020 7:06 am

Flashlight237 wrote:
Fri Aug 14, 2020 7:02 am
Well, here's Moonchyllus:
Image

Her hands are a bit detailed, but you gotta make things detailed for the best animations.
Smaller than I expected, tbh (I mean, it's a god right?), but very nice concept art!
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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by yasvsV » Fri Aug 14, 2020 7:07 am

Also, I like how the reverb was added to her voice! Its sounds... more goddess-like, I guess :D
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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by Flashlight237 » Mon Aug 17, 2020 4:47 am

Continuing the development of Moonchyllus, I made an in-game version of Xantis since I came up with a cutscene for Moonchyllus confronting Xantis himself:
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The idea was Moonchyllus would stand off against the dude, only for Xantis to snap his fingers, revealing stasis tubes (those liquid-filled, people-containing thingies you find in sci-fi movies) containing two captured goddesses: Mentis (Goddess of Wisdom and the Mind) and Morticia (Goddess of Death). Xantis used the powers of both Mentis and Morticia to make one of the red men SPAZ OUT in a cave earlier. Yeah, I had to explain that one.

Xantis would soon use the power of the captured goddesses to capture Moonchyllus. Hoo boy, that was a crazy idea.

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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by yasvsV » Mon Aug 17, 2020 7:19 am

The Xantis art looks nice and all... but I was thinking of something more sinister. 8-)
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Re: Third Boss Concept: Moonchyllus the Nature Goddess

Post by Flashlight237 » Wed Aug 19, 2020 6:15 am

Progress Update: Made some hand poses; started working on a Moonchyllus animation puppet (basically what you call a model in Adobe Flash) for animations.

Also, what's with y'all and your Hooters comments?

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